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[thedividedside]

Coma by The Divided Side Written by Dave Potts
Rain falls in parade
as we lie in wait
for the day to wash away.
In unison we sigh
and kiss our past lives goodbye...
The only friend I've ever known
was a slave in a cage that I called home.
In the midst among the haze...
we say goodnite to better days.

Found alone in the stars
trying to hide just what we are
found alone in the stars
just trying to hide...

A lonesome drive confessing sin
contemplating lifetimes of starting over again
Can we sleep? Just for a while?
Leave behind the inner child.
The blessed burning in my soul
says a falling star is a star that's letting go.

Found alone in a car
and we don't care where we are
My face covered in your tears
and a calander of wasted years....

[underfeather]

Almost spooky. I like the way you use your words.......

Am listening now. Like it! Like it lots!!!
I like that background voice happening.. Haunting.....
Nice guitar work. Nice recording.........

Shayne