New song of mine. Bridge and Chorus. Would LOVE feedback.

[almostamour]

Chorus:

Don't catch me I'd rather fall
(I need to feel the cold of the pavement)
This is not up for debate yet, I must have had this overrated

This has never been been me at all
(I will never redeem my statement)
And now it's coming far too clear, why exactly you change this time of year

(The last line blends and turns into the bridge, i'll write it again, but it's only sang once)

Bridge:
...this time of year you're not steadfast in the way that you love
Ignore me, you know exactly what it does
Convincing coincidence
You're a genius in hinderance
Your voice wheezes with ignorance
And I'm calling you out
x2

That's kind of my jam out Dashboard-esque bridge/ending. Still deciding whether or not to throw another chorus on the end of it. Not sure yet.

Whaddya think? And by the way, just in case anyone was wondering, she definitely deserves these words. Haha.

www.myspace.com/almostamour

[Rose]

I like it, good mix of words.

[Reconsiderate]

I like how you blend into the bridge. Blends, and anything gradual, are good in my book.