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My titles are too long for here, haha.


 
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derikjakob
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 11:37 am    Post subject: My titles are too long for here, haha. Reply with quote

This is honestly my first entry. Tell me what you think. I hadnt slept for over 2 days when I wrote this, just to give you a background. I was a little bit split.

IfMyPhoneHadAnyMorePowerInThisMomentIdGiveItALetterAndACapeToWearAndMakeItASuperHero


Call it. Call it a Day. Call it Quits. Call it Hardships and Triumphs. Call it each moment I breathe, I blink. Again. Once more, call it being Shocked. Amazed. Its that Jaw Dropping, Eyes Popping, Hold my Breath i took a moment ago and wait feeling. That instance that just happened might hit HARD and faster than your exhaling. And that moment in that moment lets me 'think', of the way you say kitten, pucker your lips for pictures, hold pillows in your lap when you sit, or even just stand next to me in silence while waiting in line at a store or the movies. Those are the Good Things. I Live for This. I Call You. I call you impatient. I dont mean it. Grumpy. We all are. So, I force my Insecurities on you. Not deserving or "in the mood". I wont DRop it. so call it. Call it my fault. And I'm waiting now. To call you. To say I promise it's okay and nothing's wrong. Call it a Beautiful day, but call you more beautiful. And our Tantrums, Short Fuses, Angry Actions, Reactions and Ruined Nights go away. Your voice paints perfection and melts wax from my glass and settles my blood flow. That brown eyed princess, she deserves so much. So I Release My Lungs. And i call you.

Thats it. please excuse any and all of my obnoxious titles.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 11:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ha ha ha... I like the style. Cool
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