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wtsamsel
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 10:13 pm    Post subject: Please review this new artist. Reply with quote

Please review this artist
what do you think of
songwriting
lyrics
vocals

thanx
Bill.
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Reconsiderate
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 6:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Vocal rhythms, melodies and textures seemed pretty good. IMO, the production sounded rather "basement", but you stick this guy in a room with some professional equipment, and you'll get some nice output. The song writing was pretty smooth... at times, didn't particularly inspire me to pay attention to the lyrical content. That is, I was content to sort of have it be this flowing noise in the background. And that worked because it certainly was very smooth. No rough or jagged edges, no sour notes.

I will say that "Everything Is Fine" and "New World Order" sort of stood out. He should be sticking with that style, or be building upon it.

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blissexpress
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PostPosted: Tue May 20, 2008 11:23 am    Post subject: Not Too Shabby Reply with quote

I agree with above the production needs work but the songs themselves are pretty good. The only solid critique I have is that the hooks are tame at best. I don't smell a hit amongst these but they definitely have their appeal amongst the right audience.
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PostPosted: Tue May 20, 2008 12:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The song writing is excellent.
A few of them sound like possible hits (even if they sound a bit dated)
Great voice too.
Yes the production needs a lot of work and I have a big problem with music that should be played by a band being played on a synth. That really kills it for me. Its alright if your selling your music to an artist to perform with their band but not to post or sell as a finished product.

Great songs
Great Voice
Get a band
Get in the studio

Goin' to Bermuda lol
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