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 Joined: 20 Sep 2007 More posts by Aya Location: Albany
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 6:15 pm Post subject: Lyrics need song, anyone willing to try? |
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The lyrics was actually written by a friend and shown to me, and I want to make it a song as a surprise. Can anyone help out? I'm absolutely hopeless when it comes to songwriting. Looking for a mellow song, I'll post the lyrics here:
[Flowing] through the air
with a gentleness [so pure]
the cherry blossoms [glow/fair-ly glow with]
[sanctity(?)]
We stand among [their calm]
[in] [the/a] wind that breathes new life,
the innocence of love,
is it a fantasy?
My arms around you hold you tight
your eyes, they shine with love's [pure/fair] light
Together, we make the moment last
My steady arms, your steady eyes,
yet our hearts are beating fast
CHORUS 1:
So take my hand and fly away,
together, this eternal day
Soaring high above the land
through this [sakura sora]
CHORUS2
I know that you are with me still
I feel the love in my heart fill
Never parting ways with you
[Together, starting off anew(?)]
CHORUS 3
Soaring toward the rising sun
leaving back the raging storm
Regrets, we carry with us none
The gentle rays so soft and warm
Dancing in the gentle wind,
the innocent spring love, a bliss
in the sakura sora,
[we kiss]
Together, in each others' gaze,
and with a whisper in your ear,
we fall into yet another daze
The outside world disappears...
CHORUS 1:
So take my hand and fly away,
together, this eternal day
Soaring high above the land
through this [cherry blossom sky]
Forever dancing,
forever holding,
forever lasting,
in the sakura sora
As you can see, it's not entirely done. When two words are written out, feel free to choose the one that fits better. Like I said, looking for something like pop, though if you think something else fits better, tell me. PLEASE HELP, for free haha XD. Broke here, sorry. Thanks in advance. |
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