"Van Gogh's Ear For Music"

[run2standstill]

Song:"Van Gogh's Ear For Music"
By: Monroe
Album:"Between a Devil and a Deep Blue Sea" ep

when you lie
i take every line
with a grain of salt
that you shower on my life
and like a slimy slug
I'm dying in the mud tonight

when you cry
the tears rain down
like Flaming arrows in my eyes
than i realize
just how hard it would truly be
to say goodbye
well, goodbye

you know i dreamt about you
all my life
you know i read about you
and how you would change my life
is it true?

Well I'm after you
not fasle golds, or jules,
ah whoa oh

I know that you hear me, but your not talking back
i know u hear the phone ringing, but your not pickin up
right now,
i'm not about my fathers work
right now

but, i'll praise you in this storm
while my boats held captive in the mire
untill i take full form
i'll rasie my hands HIGH in the fire
let me burn
yea, let it burn out all
worldly desire
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this is a new song, the last one i wrote that should make it on our ep comming out... so please rate it.. i'll probly be posted another song soon... but it would really help if u could give me some insite on what u think about this lyric.. thanks Godbless

-wt

[Reconsiderate]

not bad.
jives with some things i'm going through right now too.