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lowkey
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 2:25 am    Post subject: help me on this song Reply with quote

I am working on a "SEX-SONG" starting of as a one night stand ---the beat is an r&b heavily synthized beat at a 122 tempo----I am having trouble with the chorus. I want it to sound like a man is hitting on a woman and when she seems interested in him he starts bragging about how good he is ---in a subtle way--- not so much boasting....in other waords he is basically saying a one night stand with him will drive her crazy, thats the only part i have of the chorus so far, and this one night stand will also make her want him more and more and more----if you think you might be able to help me with the lyrics please do so----i hope that the information i've posted will help in every and anyway possible----thanks in advance for your response.
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ActionTekJackson
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 12:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not sure if this is quite what your lookin for, but the best I could do in a minut before lunch. Hope it works.

"Honey take a ride with me
Just for a night, take a ride on me. (Ride on me *echo*)
I can make the night last with me,
just throw the saddle on 'n you will see,
You'll wish the ride'd never end with me,
Baby, just ride on me.. (Ride on me *echo*)"

~Jackson Eyton
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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 3:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Go have a one night stand and write down your feelings right after it
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 8:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

one night and no fights
it may be wrong but it feels so right
let's not complicate things
I've been there before
So just just one night, and then I'll have to show you the door.

"It's mutual", you said.
I didn't need to worry
You had a boyfriend anyway.

"We'll just go to bed"
Never said too much
But the words were in the way I touched.... you.

And now I can tell that you're gonna wanna do it all again.
Hey, I thought this was a one-night stand.
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Reconsiderate
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 5:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

b_jets wrote:
And now I can tell that you're gonna wanna do it all again.
Hey, I thought this was a one-night stand.

pretty nice

not to downplay the rest...
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