Put these lyrics to music / what do you think of these lyric

[strawberry1]

Lonely

I sit here all alone
With no one to talk to
My heart's blue
Because I don't have you

I miss your comfort
I miss your warmth
When you're with me
I feel safe from harm
You wrapped me in your ever lovin' arms

Chorus

I'm lonely, so bored and lonely
Because I miss my one and only
Please come home to me
I need you here to dry my lonely tears

On my pillow, I cry every night
Because you walked out of my life
when I'm with you I feel alright
So come back and light up my life

Chorus

I'm lonely, so bored and lonely
Because I miss my one and only
Cone home to me
I need you here to dry my lonely tears

Bridge

If I never see you again
I know that my life won't be the same
You're my one and only friend
Please don't let our love end

I miss your comfort
I miss your warmth
when you're here with me
I feel safe from harm
You wrapped me in your ever lovin' arms

REPEAT CHORUS

[strawberry1]

Hi I'm strawberry1 I'm not getting any relies for my lyrics
"You're My Desire. Please tell me what you think of these lyrics.

[GregK]

Hey there again! Great lyrics- again..Love your stuff..have always enjoyed your lyrics (regardless of which author's name you choose!) and of course, I have some ideas- still need to think them through on this.. I'm thinking if you do something in the chorus area Notes/chords being say like C major, B, Aminor maybe mixing piano with acoustic guitar- this one I'd have the sound more stripped-down not as heavy with the instruments so as to let the simple beauty of the lyrics convey the message. So I'd say piano, acoustic guitar, maybe a fretless bass and drums..have to think about what progression would work on the verse.. and I'll take a look at your other song- that one I'm thinking something more "rumbling" or "rolling" sounding with the bass and drums and the vocals going for a lower-soft growl like some of Tina Turner's stuff before you belt it out with the chorus- will have to think on that one- and I'm realizing also that I don't wnt to give away some of the progressions I'm currently USING on my own pieces!! (whoops!) Thanks as always for the lovely lyrics- peace and all- Greg.

[Reconsiderate]

[GregK]

I think your lyrics are great! You have this incredible ability when it comes to writing lyrics and you can get a feeling across VERY well! Ok, maybe this would help people like myself to come up with ideas for your lyrics..basically what "sound" goes through your mind when you are writing the words? When you write- do you have a tempo in mind..if you can't play an instrument-ok..is there a song out there that kind-of fits the mood or sound you want? Perhaps you want an early U2 feel to a song- or maybe you have some slow sultry blues sound in mind- this helps give a mood, or an impression from which to base the music. If I read your lyrics I might get the exact idea you want- but then again I might have just come in from listening to Metallica in the car and thus be influenced to write something with a heavy sound -which may not be what you had in mind! So- if you could give maybe a few ideas of what you think or feel- it might make it a bit easier for musicians to feel the vibe and get some interesting ideas! Hope this helps! Keep up the FANTASTIC WRITING!

[triumphent]

Ms. Strawberry,

If you will sing the lyrics (as an acappella) and put it in mp3 format and email that to me, then I can tell you what I think and what I can do for you, ok?

email it to: truelifemusiccorp@yahoo.com

For more info - http://trax.2fear.com
THANKS


Lemont Gant

[strawberry1]

If anybody want to work with me on my lyrics, my phone number
is (916) 421-7214 I'm strawberry 1 or poeticart.

[mobilehomeboy]

Um, you DO know that you just posted your frikkin' PHONE NUMBER ONLINE, for every maniac and psychopath in the world to see, right?

And it's not MS. STRAWBERRY, it's MR, according to the profile.

Hope I don't go hunting chicks with triumphent up there. But, they're both NOOBS. NOOBZ, whatever the lingo is.

D-U-H.

[strawberry1]

Yes my name is Miss Strawberry and all I'm trying to do is get somebody to work with me on my lyrics. And the profile got mixed up. I'm not a man
I'm a woman. Maybe I shouldn't have put my phone nymber out there.
It was a stupid mistake. BUt you didn't have to come off the way you did.

Miss strawberry 1

[mobilehomeboy]

Maybe I didn't have to come off the way I did...

But I did, so what are you gonna do about it, Mrs. MAN. Get your facts straight, or get eaten.

THAT's the biz, biotch. Like it, or leave it.

I'm keeping it simple, and hopefully, keeping the STUPID completely out of the eqation.

Go f*** yourself, you little, insignifigant idoit.

And that's the WORD. You and your little "posse" can come get some, too.

(Bitch-slappin' in FULL EFFECT)

Punks, gotta hate 'em all. NOOB out somewhere else, because I'll eat you. Maybe even hunt you down to do so! (lololololol)

But seriously, I'll eat you.

[strawberry1]

Look Schmuck, Leave me alone and go with your life at least I have one.
Why get pissed off over somebody's phone number. It doesn't concern you. I have better things to do then to sit here and argue with a moron who has a personal attitude. And Once again I'm miss Strawberry 1 a woman, not a man a real decent woman who has morals. I don't have time for pyschopaths with an attitude.

[Bluessunn]

[mobilehomeboy]

Lol.

Welcome to Music Forte!

[joseexist]

I'd like a shot at your song.
If you can get your voice on a cd with a click track maybe(or without), I can add music. Then I can send you a disc with the full mix as well as a vox-less mix. An intro count would help as well.(and a 1 and a 2 and a 3 etc.)
As for the mobil-phone homey(don't sweat him), I'm a Texan, do what I do. Keep your guns loaded and your dogs teeth sharp!

[arnold26]