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Reconsiderate Forum Moderator

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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 5:39 pm Post subject: Carcasses & Freedom |
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Here I am, committed in this terrible marriage
to a bride who never read my resume.
You work me too hard.
It isn't fun anymore.
I'm looking for something--
a hint or a sign
that this is the work of an intelligent mind--
but everything is indiscriminate nonsense.
Tear off that freezing facade.
It isn't fun anymore.
You're as dysfunctional as they get.
You would do better if you had a mission that made
good use of your wishes,
but you're stuck in
this stressful reflection of hell,
stewing in your own frustrations.
It isn't fun anymore.
I need a legitimate way out of
this circuitous breakdown.
Open up the door to
rightful occupation.
No one to the left.
No one to the right.
No one is before me.
No one is behind.
It isn't fun anymore--
waking up to days of despair--
but what can I do?
I'm stuck in this.
Centered one!
You who is strong and calm!
Take over completely!
Descend and make it fun again!
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Click here to listen!
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Greg Music Forte Staff
 Joined: 01 May 2004 More posts by Greg Location: Plainfield, IL
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 6:53 pm Post subject: |
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That's wild. I'm always more intrigued when I see the lyrics/words first and then hear the music behind it.
It's like meeting a person before reading their auto-biography. Not that these are true-experiences to your life, but probably to your observations.
I hate my analogies. Their just all wrong, but I can't get out the words that I realy intend to say.
"...meeting a person before reading their auto-biography"??? Maybe it's more the other way around. I'll never be able to decide who the story teller is - the music or lyracist. I guess they go hand in hand.
You guys did a great job. The music and words and overall feel are very supportive of each other. It's spellbinding. |
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Reconsiderate Forum Moderator

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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 8:57 pm Post subject: |
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| Greg wrote: |
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That's what it's like for me when I'm doing anything other than chatting on forums.
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strawberry1 Neophyte

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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 6:04 pm Post subject: Geat Song! |
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Dear Reconciderate
I love your song carcasses and Caresses The Song about the marriage.
I love the uptempo beat. That's my style of music. I really love it. I may have gotten the title wrong, but I hope you know what I'm talking about.
Well the lyrics I can Identify with, because I was once in a marriage that I wasn't happy in. I wasn't no fun in fact it was as boring as hell. I'm not in it no more so I'm happy for now. Thanks for such great lyrics.
Sncerely Yours,
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Reconsiderate Forum Moderator

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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 5:52 pm Post subject: Re: Geat Song! |
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Dear Reconciderate
I love your song carcasses and Caresses The Song about the marriage.
I love the uptempo beat. That's my style of music. I really love it. I may have gotten the title wrong, but I hope you know what I'm talking about.
Well the lyrics I can Identify with, because I was once in a marriage that I wasn't happy in. I wasn't no fun in fact it was as boring as hell. I'm not in it no more so I'm happy for now. Thanks for such great lyrics.
Sncerely Yours,
Strawberry 1 |
you've made my day. nay,
you've made my week. nay,
you've made my month. nay,
you've made my year. nay,
you've made my decade. nay,
you've made my century. nay,
my life.
nay, my life.
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