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Don’t know where I stand with you


 
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BillyFalcon
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 8:42 am    Post subject: Don’t know where I stand with you Reply with quote


Brick Off a Bridge (MADE MAN)
Billy Falcon


Don’t know where I stand with you
But I’ll stand anywhere you want me to







I’m a brick off a bridge,







a penny from the pocket








Of your thrift store jacket,







a teardrop in your locket






Thought I had a grip, but I tasted your lips and I fell








Feather from a dove at the will of the wind





But these weightless seconds I hazard the end







To float like a dancer high over the cancer of being alone






Don’t know where I stand with you
But I’ll stand anywhere you want me to
I’m a brick off a bridge, a penny from the pocket
Of your thrift store jacket, a teardrop in your locket
Thought I had a grip, but I tasted your lips
And I fell down hard






A pause in your poem, a breathless sigh








A prayer asking too much, a spot that won’t dry







Dyin’ to fly





I’m a brick off a bridge, a penny from the pocket
Of your thrift store jacket, a teardrop in your locket
Thought I had a grip, but I tasted your lips
And I fell down hard, yes I fell down hard


I’m a brick off a bridge, a penny from the pocket
Of your thrift store jacket, a teardrop in your locket
Thought I had a grip, but I tasted your lips
And I fell down hard
Don’t know where I stand with you
But I’ll stand anywhere you want me to

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Hear The Record:

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Bluessunn
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 4:35 pm    Post subject: Clever... Love the photos... Reply with quote

Rage against the Machine used a similar style of juxtaposing

phtotgraphs with words in the cover and booklet of their last album.

-Taylor A. of Bluessunn



To get a feel for artists I have recorded/ promoted, check out:

http://www.myspace.com/jaminbray

http://www.myspace.com/catarinothebutcher
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Reconsiderate
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 7:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

that's pretty cool
with the words and pictures and all

i like graphic novels.
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 3:04 pm    Post subject: LUV THOSE LYRICS Reply with quote

BillyFALCON

Those lyrics are hot. They're well written.
And I like the photographs that you used to express the feelings
behind the song. It brought life to the song and any girl would love
it. Keep up the good writing

Strawberry 1
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