tell me honestly what you think

[tessabell]

She built herself a set of walls,
That little girl couldn’t take any more
Now no one could get close enough
She didn’t let them in; they couldn’t touch.
In her world so far away,
She lived alone, mixing night and day
With no one to lose, she had no pain to feel
Looking for love wasn’t a part of the deal.
She didn’t let him in; she saw him there but left it.
He broke in, in the dark and undetected

[xhkxboix]

it's neat!

[Reconsiderate]

pretty good. i like the subject matter a lot more than the crowd-pleasing happy-ending smiley face sugar coated garbage that makes it onto the top 40.

turning this into a song, perchance?