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strawberry1 Neophyte

 Joined: 14 Apr 2006 More posts by strawberry1
1.524 Music Forte Dollars
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:04 pm Post subject: What Do You Think Of These Lyrics/Dark Shadow |
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Dark shadow in the night
Ruining most of my life
Been haunting me since 1984
To even the score
Because I won' secum to it
Because I won't give in to it
It wants me back in Little Rock
Living homeless in a bad vivd dream
It wants me strung out on dope
so that I won't be able to cope
It wants trapped in ghettos and ugly scenes
Dark shadow, won't let me be
Dark shadow, won't let me live free
Every time I try to accomplish something
It pulls me back
Its' all dressed in black
To take me back
To my dark past of nightmares
It Ruined my book "The Life Of Angela Wilson"
It ruined my marriage
And tried to to bury my children
In a death carriage
And killed my chances to see the light
Dark shadow let me go
You can't hold me down no more
Dark Shadow get out of my life
And disappear into the night
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arnold26 Newbie

 Joined: 21 Oct 2007 More posts by arnold26
0.506 Music Forte Dollars
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 4:18 pm Post subject: Re: What Do You Think Of These Lyrics/Dark Shadow |
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| strawberry1 wrote: |
Dark shadow in the night
Ruining most of my life
Been haunting me since 1984
To even the score
Because I won' secum to it
Because I won't give in to it
It wants me back in Little Rock
Living homeless in a bad vivd dream
It wants me strung out on dope
so that I won't be able to cope
It wants trapped in ghettos and ugly scenes
Dark shadow, won't let me be
Dark shadow, won't let me live free
Every time I try to accomplish something
It pulls me back
Its' all dressed in black
To take me back
To my dark past of nightmares
It Ruined my book "The Life Of Angela Wilson"
It ruined my marriage
And tried to to bury my children
In a death carriage
And killed my chances to see the light
Dark shadow let me go
You can't hold me down no more
Dark Shadow get out of my life
And disappear into the night
Poeticart |
When you see a red line under a word it means it is misspelled. You should correct the spelling even if the spell checker can't. I assume you want the word "succumb". Get rid of the two words "Because". They ruin the two lines. |
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