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josediaz
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Joined: 11 Feb 2007
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Location: Victoria
0.208 Music Forte Dollars
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 Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 10:39 pm Post subject: Hmmm,,, |
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I'm game.
But, we already have the lyric. Do either of us have an old chord progression or idea we have yet to find something to match it up with?
I'll start looking.
All music piques my interest Bro.
Funny thing is, my brother-in-law may have recited this lyric to me a while back. The chorus is really fammilliar.Lets run with it though.
Heard anything from Strawberry? |
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arnold26
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Joined: 21 Oct 2007
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0.506 Music Forte Dollars
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| Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 8:34 am Post subject: Re: Put these lyrics to music / what do you think of these l |
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Lonely
I sit here all alone
With no one to talk to
My heart's blue
Because I don't have you
I miss your comfort
I miss your warmth
When you're with me
I feel safe from harm
You wrapped me in your ever lovin' arms
Chorus
I'm lonely, so bored and lonely
Because I miss my one and only
Please come home to me
I need you here to dry my lonely tears
On my pillow, I cry every night
Because you walked out of my life
when I'm with you I feel alright
So come back and light up my life
Chorus
I'm lonely, so bored and lonely
Because I miss my one and only
Cone home to me
I need you here to dry my lonely tears
Bridge
If I never see you again
I know that my life won't be the same
You're my one and only friend
Please don't let our love end
I miss your comfort
I miss your warmth
when you're here with me
I feel safe from harm
You wrapped me in your ever lovin' arms
REPEAT CHORUS |
Hi,
I do think your need music music before you write your lyrics. You seem to have talent for writing lyrics, but lets start with a first verse that you think is good. Your last verse has possibilites for being a good first verse.
Work on this then I'll put music to to for you to work on the other verses:
When you were with me
My world had no boundary
Every day brought something new
And I was sure what I needed to do.
This is not written in concrete, so change it if you want. When you have this first verse as you want it, send it to me, and Ill put music to it.
By the way, after I put music to it, do you know how I can post it, or send it to you? |
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