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"The Lion Whos Claws Were Taken Away" REVIEW LYIRC


 
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PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2007 7:41 pm    Post subject: "The Lion Whos Claws Were Taken Away" REVIEW LYIRC Reply with quote

"The Lion Whos Claws Were Taken Away"by:MONROEPlease contain the man behind the curtains,
wielding a cain
I'm almost certainly certain, my secound act
could be pleasing, to your brian
to all of you who are tounting and teasing
as you choke on your blasphemy
Your soaking in your vanity
shooting arrows at those who differ from your ways
as you lay in bed
dripping in piss and sweat
me and your father are
watching your bride work the room
like a seasoned vet,
i dont know why your surprised

So put growing up on hold
a good times on the other line

Our whole team went down looking
i went 0 for 3
you say "watch me as i turn water into wine
and the sea into lust, that drives our eyes
if you wanna see pain, put my blood in your vines
crack open my head, and walk a mile with my brian
i'm commonly mistaken, for a nomad whos been house broken
or a lion whos claws have been taken away"

put growing up on hold
ingnorice is on the other line

they say my bark is meaner than my bite
but i've had to bite my tongue one too many times
I would rather see blood in my mouth
than your blood on the ground, so keep that in mind
so i'll gnaw on my gums untill my face is numb,
to the sound of your vioce, chanting your song of pride
while you dance in your dress of "distress"
you wear all your vomit filled cloths as bages of honour
and the blood of your fangs stain the hearts of so many others
but you do what you please
i'll be safe on my knees
face down in peace
swimming in love
for he has the keys
the doors of mysteries,
and secrets yet to be seen
i hope you will see
i hope you will see

so put growing up on hold
a good times on the other line

all lyrics by wts

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song i just wrote... very abstract song.. if u have any questions please act.. and also.. REVIEW IT PLEASE!

wts
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PostPosted: Tue May 08, 2007 4:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i know how you feel.

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