what do you think?

[Jeelingson]

hey guys, i have only written three songs, i am 16 please let me know what you think of this!

[musicfan]

First of all, you seem to be one of the few that actually makes their music accessible from the area you are asking for feedback from. Thank you for not asking me to run to MySpace.

You're very talented. The rhythms of the vocal melody line and guitar challenge each other in a successful way, and it really makes me want to hear the drum track. I mean that in a very positive way. Drums would enforce the groove, which is already fantastic but could be slightly perplexing, depending on the interpretation.

Words and melody are great, so you need to get into a studio with that. Or find a way to get it onto a mixing console.

It's a good song. You're a good musician, and I hope your parents will give you some support to push forward with your work.

[Jeelingson]

Thanks sooo much! just getting one response mean alot to me! I will definitely keep going, i would like to record it soon. I have a friend who drums so i will have to see if he can put anything to this song.